I quite enjoyed this one. There is some snappy dialogue, some interesting characters and often it is fun and breezy. This stuff is hampered though by quite a few issues, most notably the plot.

Title Reviewed: COULDA, WOULDA, SHOULDA
Reviewed by: Agent Cooper

Firstly, I’d just like to say that you write very well. Your formatting is excellent (barring one of two anomalies listed below), and your scene lengths are good too. Your structure is also very sound, and your dialogue (for the most part) is nice and laconic, although some of it is definitely too on-the-nose in places.

Title Reviewed: Honor of the Family
Reviewed by: elijoel

I thought this was a well structured screenplay. The scenes were pacey and clear. The direction writing - and the dialogue writing were all tight and clear.

Title Reviewed: The Jericho Letters
Reviewed by: Anne Lillis

I really enjoyed this script, quirky and humorous and I can definitely see it as a movie. Really good idea and concept here, just let down a tiny bit by some average characters. The dialogue was fine though and kept a good pace.

Title Reviewed: Somebody is Watching
Reviewed by: SeanpaulThomasCairns

Wow, I always thought that highschool wrestling was a gentleman's sport. You show some of that but more than a little of "Big time 'Rasslin'" too. End of my naivete, I guess.

Title Reviewed: Requiem Ghosts
Reviewed by: jfschuurman

Review of The Last Great American Movie You would need to have a cameo in this by SarahCuder Palin and her half-wit husband. Why?

Title Reviewed: The Last Great American Movie
Reviewed by: srhite

Okay, I’m afraid I don’t have too much to say. So this’ll be a fairly brief review. Your concept is solid, a little MOTW, but solid.

Title Reviewed: Blackout
Reviewed by: Ed Rodgers

This short film for me gave the impression that the character E.Lang experienced both sides of the coin. The rewards of employment and the pressures of unrealistic demands placed upon self when times become harder are clear. Somehow there is a sinster and dark edge to the delivery of this aside.

Title Reviewed: The Preacher & His Wife
Reviewed by: 1sophiaben

No real flow in story line. Events,though dramatic tends to pop up at random. Leaves the reader hanging a bit.The Setup is reasonable.The confrontation I found reasonable,but dull.

Title Reviewed: The Confidante (4th Draft)
Reviewed by: bloubul

Let me start by saying with the genre stating Comedy/Romance, I was expecting something very different. I believe that the storyline and plot points are far too dark and strong to be sold as a comedy. The beginning is strong with some real feeling of tragedy.

Title Reviewed: Date My Dad
Reviewed by: oscarbomb

Characters The characters were real. The struggles that James displayed is something that everyone could relate to. Dealing with regret and forgiveness is a constant struggle for people.

Title Reviewed: CAROLINA HOME
Reviewed by: Godfirst2786

The concept is not too incredibly innovative it's loosely based on the Greek myth of Romulus being raised by a wolf. But the setting with the Native American flare was kinda of interesting. Overall Jeremy's dialogue sounds much too proper for a little child of his age and should include a little more slang.

Title Reviewed: Jeremy and the Legend of the graywolf
Reviewed by: philliplindsey

The best screenplay I have read since I've been on the street. Of course, I've only read six screenplays, but this was by far the most polished and entertaining of the bunch. The opening was FUNNY, but more than that, warns us that there is another dimesion of comedy still unexplored out there.

Title Reviewed: The Last Great American Movie
Reviewed by: tommyroz

To tell the truth i really wanted to enjoy this piece i really did...but to be honest i couldn't. The language felt forced and unreal, and the only thing even remotely funny about this short story was the fact that it was suppose to be a comedy, that was kinda funny. I'm sorry if i sound rude or not giving constructive criticism but i truly feel as though the writer felt that he was smarter than he actually came across.

Title Reviewed: NAMES
Reviewed by: Ryan LaBee

First off, I'd like to say that I liked the imagery in the opening scene. The coconut house on the beach was very creative and playful. But I had many problems with the script after that.

Title Reviewed: Isabelle's Rainbow
Reviewed by: karthig

Gang Capital paints a vivid and dirty picture of a gang torn neighbourhood. Early hope is pretty quickly stamped out in a rush of blood and violence that corrupts everything in its way. The writing and descriptions keep the mood and pacing tight and intense.

Title Reviewed: GANG CAPITAL
Reviewed by: Nathan

I was impressed with this story. The author captured a mood that most struggling writers face. I was absorbed by this bizarre world.

Title Reviewed: Number 36
Reviewed by: mariolopezjr

It was a pleasure to read Something out of Nothing. A very well thought out story with a moral compass. Michael was an everyman protagonist with choices to consider.He definitely goes through a major charater arc to resolve the story.

Title Reviewed: Something Out of Nothing
Reviewed by: hesgot

Well to begin with i believe the director of this short "Life Cycle" had a very unique and interesting idea, and was able to convey the idea with little to no budget. That being said, i do believe there were many areas that needed some work. For starters, I didn’t think the two actors in this short brought much to the table.

Title Reviewed: Life Cycle
Reviewed by: Ryan LaBee

The first ten pages are interesting, but ultimately hard to follow. After that, the script becomes even more confusing and convoluted. The main characters, without names and hardly any physical descriptions, are hard follow and not relatable.

Title Reviewed: The Surface
Reviewed by: whitc101