Fleming

Genres: Comedy, Drama
Length: 101 pages
Downloads: 28
Uploaded: 01/02/2007
Synopsis: An alienated foster child must translate Klingon for the eccentric grandfather who raised him to the staff of a mental care home.
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love in any language Ranking Review
By: dennispatton
Review of: Fleming
on: 01/02/2007
Do not know enough right now to give you much technical advice, but can tell you that you really touched... [more]
Filet of F(lemming) Ranking Review
By: cyberscribe
Review of: Fleming
on: 01/02/2007
Congratulations, first off, on completing your script, no matter which draft this is. There is much to be commended here,... [more]
Good ... Ranking Review
By: gunaseln
Review of: Fleming
on: 01/02/2007
I have to admit that this is a heart-wrenching story. Some of the scenes that you wrote are excellent. 1)... [more]

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Uploaded by: matthewlane
Writer: Matthew Lane
Production Notes: *UPDATE: NEW VERSION OF FLEMING IS ALMOST FINISHED AND WILL BE POSTED SOON (7/25/08)*

This is the first draft of Fleming, which I have been working on for over 2 years. Already shaping up the next draft, but wanted to get some valued feedback from TS members for further polishing. I'm aware of many of the problem areas (including the incorrect usage of jump cuts and "continuous", as well as the excessive usage of beats, which have already been removed from the next draft) but have found the overall response to be very positive so far. Please feel free to rip it to hell wherever need be. Your read and review will be very much appreciated. Thanks a lot.

Brief Bio: I've directed some music videos and several television projects, including a nationally syndicated series, "RPM" (back in 1999-2003), which reached over 18 million homes in the U.S. and abroad. I have also written for Relevant Magazine a few times, as well as organized and promoted a handful of concert events... [more]
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