Literature and film bring this reviewer to places he has never gone. V4 brings me to the world of amatuer soccer in Wales, and introduces me to a fictional skilled striker from Ghana, an Asante tribal member. Since I don't follow the sport, I missed the subtlies that a fan and player know.

Title Reviewed: Devolution (2nd edition)
Reviewed by: James Moriarty

i haven't read to many scripts before and this is my first review but i will try to be as constructive and to the point as possible. First, the text is filled with grammar, syntax and plain english language errors. I read a lot of books in my spare time so this is just something i notice while reading but do not actually consider it to be a problem in this case.

Title Reviewed: Stevia Nights
Reviewed by: aerozg

INTRO: Once I was assigned this I was really looking forward to reading and reviewing it, but I was really struggling to find anything good about it during the first Act. Sorry to be sounding too negative but it really was a hard read. By the kidnap part (which is the best part of this by the way) I found this was the only section that spoke volumes of what could have been.

Title Reviewed: There She Is
Reviewed by: D J Sheridan

I think the concept of the story was good. I don't know if certain plot points and defining originality in the characters stood out enough, but I do think the storyline was interesting. Maybe even give it a quick re-read after reading about some of the transition rules, for example "fade in" goes on the top left of the story.

Title Reviewed: Mischief Reborn
Reviewed by: ericpfost

I'm sure a lot of time went into this and it looks fine. I just find that I've seen a bunch of stop motion music videos and this one doesn't really stick out as one that I was blown away by. I feel in order for stop motion to work anymore there has to be more to it than that things seem to magically be moving, it almost needs more than a tradition narrative to focus on the story.

Title Reviewed: Junket
Reviewed by: BUNKER

I was torn because I wasn't sure how I felt about the whole narrator over a guy going about his business. My first thought was I wasn't a fan, but as I continued to watch it, the location was so surreal to me I became fascinated. This is a good piece of visual art.

Title Reviewed: Shelter by the Sea
Reviewed by: BUNKER

I think you did a very good job with this storyline. There's a few changes I think you would see by simply reading over and tweaking some of the structure, but overall it was good. The 'back to flashback' is something I would take out.

Title Reviewed: Inquest (revised)
Reviewed by: ericpfost

A thought-provoking little piece that conveys a message from the writer-director. Not much goes on in the film but we have a funny opening of an old guy warning the camera crew following him that not much is going to happen and they'll be wasting their film. I don't think the film a waste of time but visually it's not exactly a treat.

Title Reviewed: Rituals
Reviewed by: Warren Paul Glover

Can't See Me, takes the audience in an awkward ride to situations where no one wants to be, it takes us out of the comfort zone of our surroundings and exposes humans to see themselves in a mirror with a very well done cinematography, powerful images and symbolisms, if anything a little bit more work in mixing the sound would have been great but overall a well presented short film.

Title Reviewed: Can't See Me
Reviewed by: areazerofilms

Road is an experimental video with good job in the editing room, however Road lacks of intensity and camera angles, it looks like the intention was to make a perfect mix of music and video and is in this matter that Road is missing something. The music does not deliver at the same level as the camera work and the well done editing job.

Title Reviewed: Road
Reviewed by: areazerofilms

Hey, Will. I read this months ago but was really surprised by how much of a revision you've done. I thought it was just a tweaking but some of the changes are major like the scene with the vampire on page 2 and the voice over.

Title Reviewed: One Last One
Reviewed by: Revale

Very interesting, well written story. I found it to be intriguing and well conceived. The ending was satisfying and fit with the story.

Title Reviewed: Subsistence
Reviewed by: alexherrin

Part 4 provides a good look into the world of adolescence. The story is about a young biracial soccer player in England. He is a good athlete, but he may have engaged in unsportsman conduct on the soccer pitch.

Title Reviewed: 13.45 (part 4)
Reviewed by: James Moriarty

In The Other Universe Had some witty banter but not much comedy. A short story essentially about a young woman exchanging email with friends—just didn’t ring with anything new or unusual to hold one’s attention to really draw you into the story.

Title Reviewed: In The Other Universe
Reviewed by: covofdark

I have to say, this is a fun, quirky take on the typical rom-com. The characters grow on you after a while, and though George and Brenda come off as demented by the third act, it still manages to work. That’s not to say the screenplay doesn’t have issues.

Title Reviewed: George's Sister Maggie
Reviewed by: lizzayn

Overall the script is entertaining. The premise is interesting if not entirely unique. I liked the bookend ending though it wasn't exactly a surprise.

Title Reviewed: Vanity Is...
Reviewed by: Stages Of Drama

It’s a wonderful concept. I really enjoy mythology and myth based screenplays. You’ve done a good job to take a little used story for the base as opposed to the glut of vampires and werewolves currently in film.

Title Reviewed: Port Wikkalyn
Reviewed by: lizzayn

I was truly engaged by this story from beginning to end. The characters felt alive, and the passion, however fleeting, felt real. I was forced to look upon my own life, and the choices I have made with friends and women, which was uncomfortable, but also insightful and moving.

Title Reviewed: The Hard Choice
Reviewed by: alexherrin

Hello there, this is my first review of a short story and consequently a strange one, as I have no idea what I just read! It seems to just be a long, or short depending on how you look at it, inside joke. I don't think there is much to google, as you explain everything quite clearly; there just isn't much here.

Title Reviewed: In The Other Universe
Reviewed by: alexherrin

If you ever imagined what Titanic would be like without all the sepia flash backs to Rose and Jack and was just set in the present. It would most likely be this screenplay - rich in character, detail, dreams, sweat, disappointment and one man who just won't give up on his dream of bringing Black Morgan's Hadiya to the surface. A man who is willing to give up a stable life and his marriage for the dream of rising a barnacled piece of ship wreck is quite an intriguing one.

Title Reviewed: Raising the Hadiya (Revised)
Reviewed by: elysiumfilms